Yes, i'm still alive, kind of, more posts should be on the way soon so watch out for that.
Here's just a little snippet that I wrote, read it in all its strange choicy glory.
The man in front of me grins a salamander grin, the skin of his neck creating folds under a stubbly chin, as if the smile was weighing down his entire face. It was not a good smile. He pushes forward two boxes the size of matchboxes.
In front of his left hand is a box of unadorned mahogany, just a dark box and nothing more. But it's simple design reeked of the quality of kings, it's seams sure and sealed, it's corners crisp and clean. It sits confident as a cat in its own worth and powers. Open me if you care, if you dare, it seems to say.
The box pushed forward by his left hand was of white opaque Quartz. It glittered with shifting dreams of forgotten promises and joyful days spend on joyful things. It's lid seems fit to pop open and spill it's enthusiasm to any who would listen, simply waiting for someone to peek at the hope and mystery inside.
Salamander says in a low sticky voice, "chose your own fate young thief. The choice is yours which box you chose, perhaps one is your poison and the other a blessing, perhaps they are both punishments for your crimes, the choice is yours"
Tut tut, naughty naughty little thief. Which do you chose?
Let me know in the comments what your choice was and how you feel about your fate. the choice is yours. >:)
Let me know in the comments what your choice was and how you feel about your fate. the choice is yours. >:)
That's really good!
ReplyDeleteNabila // Hot Town Cool Girl
Thanks, I'm glad you like it!
DeleteFeel free to chose a box >:)
I love the concept of this post. So awesome and well-written too. I'd choose the first box, even though it feels like I'm about to make a horrible mistake. I don't know why, but that box is just more appealing to me.
ReplyDeletex Envy
Lost in Translation
Thank you so much Envy,
DeleteI would have chosen that one too if I had that choice (although if I had creepy salamander men giving me boxes I think I'd have bigger problems :P)
I'm glad you like the concept, I felt like trying it out, I might to do more in the future if I'm in the mood.
I was thinking about the best way of offering the two choices, I was going to just comment it but now I'm going to make links for each choice. They should be up and you can check in a bit.
Thanks for the comment!